误:A child as [though] he was, he did quite well.
正:Child as (=though) he was, he did quite well.
析:在 as 引起的让步状语从句的倒装形式中,置于句首的单数可数名词通常不用冠词。
■小孩喜欢像糖果和玩具之类的东西。
误:Children like such things like candy and toys.
正:Children like such things as candy and toys.
析:在 such... as 是固定搭配,不要受汉语影响将 as 换成like 之类的词。
■不要读你看不懂的书。
误:Don’t read such books that you don’t understand.
正:Don’t read such books as you don’t understand.
析:本来 such...as 和 such...that 都可以说,但在这两个结构中,as是关系代词,用以引导定语从句,且在此定语从句中用作 undeerstand的宾语;而 that 是连词,用以引导结果状语从句。比较:
误:He is such a clever boy as we all like him.
正:He is such a clever boy that we all like him.
■既然你很忙,那就不必来了。
误:As you are busy, so you needn’t come.
正:As you are busy, you needn’t come.
正:You are busy, so you needn’t come.
析:as 是从属连词,在此引导原因状语从句;so 是并列连词,在此连接一个并列句,所以此句结构混乱,应去掉其中一个。顺 便说一句,若 as 引导方式状语,则可以与 so 连用。如:As you treat me, so I shall treat you.(你怎样对我,我就怎样对你)。As you like music, so I like poetry.(正如你喜欢音乐,我喜欢诗歌)。
■我打算去邮局。——当你在邮局的时候,请帮我买几张邮票好吗?
误:I’m going to the post offic.—As you are there, can you get me some stamps?
正:I’m going to the post offic.—While you are there, can you get me some stamps?
析:as 引导时间状语从句表示“当...的时候”、“在... 期间” 时,该从句的谓语通常是那些表示动作意义的动词,而不能是 be(是,在), have(有),like(喜欢),belong(属于)等表示状 态或静态意义的动词。