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[学习方法] 小学一年级英语作文范文:水滴与大海(Waterdrop and sea)

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小学一年级英语作文范文:水滴与大海(Waterdrop and sea)
    A long time ago, and has a small drop of water in the east china sea listening to the story of the east china sea grandpa stresses. it is aware of the east china sea using miles apart, can not be described in a vast sea, with 1000 960 high enough to describe the depth of the sea. it is very envious of the east china sea. Therefore, it asked the East China Sea grandfather: "grandpa east.
    Why then has the vast East China Sea so deep? "East grandfather told it:" I also another little drop of water, I and many partners around the clock to muddy pool together a small partnership, it becomes a small stream. But we do not stop pace, the United States is continuing to pour forward, and then became rivers. Finally many rivers come together; it becomes a sea, the formation of the East China Sea. "Small drop asked: "we really have so much power? Can be turned into a stream, into a river into the sea? "East grandpa replied: "of course not! Can not become small rivers flow, so you can become the sea. Also, into the sea, do not forget the existence of small water droplets, not to overlook the power of small water droplets, but it is the source of our life! Without it, we would not. "Small drop in the east china sea remember his grandfather, finally became the famous South China Sea.
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沙发
发表于 2013-8-26 15:19:04 | 只看该作者
国内的一年级的小朋友要达到这样的水平吗?感觉有点困难
板凳
发表于 2013-8-28 13:33:05 | 只看该作者
这是范文吗?怎么感觉好多不妥的地方呢???
地板
发表于 2013-8-28 14:59:48 | 只看该作者
是国外的一年级吧?
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发表于 2013-8-29 14:06:30 | 只看该作者
写得真好啊!不错不错!
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发表于 2013-8-30 10:47:02 | 只看该作者
同楼上的,从字数到内容都不太合适小学一年级的水平和要求啊
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发表于 2013-8-30 10:48:59 | 只看该作者
赞同楼上的,从字数到内容来看都不太适合小学一年级的水平和要求啊
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发表于 2013-9-2 10:54:20 | 只看该作者
谢谢楼主分享!!
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