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[语文] 2013博奥学校第二批征文选登:这件事,我做对了(作者刘嘉音)

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这件事,我做对了
  作者: 刘嘉音 指导教师:程三平
  每当一看到电脑,我就想到以前一件印象深刻的事。
  那还是二零零八年的春天时,我迷上了电脑,那里面的小游戏,我都能无师自通的很轻松的玩起来。
  一个周末,刚吃完午饭,妈妈照例要午休,她吩咐在客厅里看会电视。我看了会,就开始嘀咕起来:“电视可真无聊啊,又不给我看好玩的动画片,也不让我玩有趣的游戏。嗯………不如,我去玩会儿电脑吧!”
  我轻手轻脚地“溜”到房间去看看有没有什么“异常”,还好还好,妈妈睡得正香呢!“呼噜!呼噜!”打鼾声不绝于耳。“啊哈!这下我就可以安心玩电脑啦!”我开心地都快要唱起来了。我施展起的我的“超级无敌溜溜功”一下子窜到了电脑前,快乐地一屁股坐下去,准备开机喽!
  可是这时,我心里的两个精灵“恶魔”“天使”出现了。“天使”说:“妈妈说了,她信任我,我不能偷偷玩电脑,要做乖小孩哦!” “哎呀,就玩一下,就只十分钟,时间又不多,没事的。” “恶魔”说。“不行,被发现了要被打的喔,啪!啪!好痛的。”“没被发现那可就幸运了,你想,电脑的东西好东西太多了!资料、书籍、游戏………应有尽有。”“不行,妈妈说过,游戏是玩不完的。就算是玩会儿,也不过瘾,而且万一她醒了,发现了我这个“小偷”,她以后不会再信任我了。”“嗯,这倒也是哦!”两个小精灵经过长久的对话,最终是“天使”胜利地说服了“恶魔”。我听从了“天使”的召唤,悄悄地回到客厅里看电视去了。
  妈妈醒来后,看到我还在客厅里看电视,直夸我是好孩子,并且还主动地提出来,每个周末,将会奖励我一个小时的玩电脑时间。嘿嘿,这件事,我做对了!
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沙发
发表于 2013-6-11 09:41:26 | 只看该作者
赞一个,感谢老师的分享,现在的孩子都很棒!
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发表于 2013-6-14 18:43:21 | 只看该作者

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发表于 2013-6-19 09:48:57 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2013-6-21 23:17:09 | 只看该作者
好作文,谢谢分享。。。
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