小学英语作文--我的同桌

djt000

My Deskmate

I’m study in primary school grade four. My deskmate is a little girl. She is really small but cute. She has a pair of long hair and her skin color is white. She doesn’t talk too much. She always quiet but sometimes she is very active when talking with me. She is good at study and singing. We often help each other in study. I love to be with her. A few years later, I think I will still remember the days when we were deskmates.

我在读小学四年级。我的同桌是一个小女孩。她真的很小，但是很可爱。她有一头长长的头发，她皮肤的颜色是白色的。她不怎么说话。她总是安静，但有时和我说话的时候却是很活跃的。她学习和音乐很好。我们经常在学习上互相帮助。我喜欢跟她在一起。几年后，我想我还是会记得我们是同桌的这段日子。

Scylla刘

总体结构很好哦~ 但是有些语言表达习惯上的误用和个别语法问题存在哦
She has a pair of long hair and her skin color is white.有些不妥啊